Sonnet 73 (LXXIII), by William Shakespeare
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Sonnet 73 (LXXIII), by William Shakespeare
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Sonnet 73 (LXXIII), by William Shakespeare
When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang
Upon those boughs which shake against the cold,
Bare ruin'd choirs, where late the sweet birds sang.
In me thou see'st the twilight of such day
As after sunset fadeth in the west,
Which by and by black night doth take away,
Death's second self, that seals up all in rest.
In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire
That on the ashes of his youth doth lie,
As the death-bed whereon it must expire,
Consum'd with that which it was nourish'd by.
This thou perceiv'st, which makes thy love more strong,
To love that well which thou must leave ere long.
Let's Read Together
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I know that you already have gone through the text at least for once as you have scrolled down to this line. How about listening to the poem here just once to check if this wonderful reading helps you to comprehend the text better?
Did it work? How about reading the poem once again now, slowly, bit by bit?
Lines 1-4
That
time of year thou (you) mayst (may) in me behold (see)
So,
we have a speaker here, addressing someone, or some people, right? But whom is
the speaker speaking to? Us, the readers?
Do
you find the line difficult to comprehend? It’s probably due to the inverted
syntactic structure. Let’s straighten it up:
Thou
mayst behold that time of year in me
I’m sure you get the meaning now without much ado. But what’s time the speaker is referring to?
When
yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang
Upon
those boughs which shake against the cold,
Bare
ruin'd choirs where late the sweet birds sang.
Do
you get the ‘time’? It’s that time in the late autumn or early winter when the trees shed their leaves, and are left only with a few,
if not none, clinging to the branches/boughs that shake against the cold wind. It’s
that time when the sweet birds sang late, towards the end, when the choirs were
all left bare and abandoned in ruins.
I’m
sure that you didn’t overlook the inversion in the 4th line just
because it is not that tough to comprehend, right? And now when you have been
able to understand the meaning of the line on your own, it's time for you note
its importance. If the structure of this clause was not inverted the way it has
been done, do you think the 4th line would have rhymed with the second line? Yes,
that's how syntax in verses gets inverted to address the metrical purposes of
the text. Apart from this reason, inversions are also used to foreground or
highlight different aspects in an
argument.
But
where to such comparisons are leading? Old age? Age of decay and abandonment?
How might this help the speaker to build up his argument? What is it that the
speaker is trying to say after all?
Lines 5-8
In
me thou see'st (see) the twilight of such day
As
after sunset fadeth (fades) in the west,
Which
by and by black night doth (does)
take away,
Death's
second self, that seals up all in rest.
Do
you find any shift in the pattern of the argument? Nothing as such, right? The
listener(s) now see(s), in the speaker, the twilight of such a day that fades
into the black night after the sun sets in the west and sleep, and death’s
second self, or alter ego, or sleep puts all in rest to sleep. Have you noticed
that the probability hinted in the very first line is dropped by now? Can you
guess why? Do you feel that the speaker is sounding more confident in pursuing
the listener(s) now?
Lines 9-12
In
me thou see'st (see) the glowing of such fire
That
on the ashes of his youth doth (does) lie,
As
the death-bed whereon it must expire,
Consum'd
with that which it was nourish'd by.
Are
you still wondering the way the speaker is still continuing the same way to
build up his argument? But still, we have again a new metaphor being used,
right? – the metaphor of a dying fire?
The
listener(s) now see(s), in the speaker, the glowing of such a fire that now is
on the verge of dying, the flames buried under the ash. What once had been the
sustenance of the fire, the fuel, now burnt to ashes do engulf the flame and
choke the fire. Isn’t the observation amazingly wonderful? But what’s the
purpose?
Lines 13-14
This
thou perceiv'st (perceive/understand), which makes thy (your) love more
strong,
To love that well which thou must leave ere
(before) long .
Do
you get the argument now? The listener, when perceives this, would love the
speaker more for s/he would realise that the speaker wouldn’t be there to be
loved in person for long. Isn’t the speaker cunning and manipulative enough to pursue
the listener, to love him/her more?
Reading the Text as a Whole
The Drama
So,
now let’s approach to connote the text as a whole. Would you like to call this
a monologue, as we have a speaker addressing some silent listener? Surely the
organic character of the speaker, cunningly persuasive, and the silent listener
add to the dramatic nature of the text, right?
Carpe Diem
Does
it seem to you that some mature aged person is pursuing his or her beloved to
love more just because the life remaining is too short? It’s the carpe diem tradition
where emphasis is placed upon seizing the day before it passes into the night.
An Amorous Poem
It
then seems to be an amorous poem, right?- an ardent love poem? Hence, you might
consider that here we have only one listener, not more than the speaker’s
beloved, if you please. There is though no way to get the gender identity of
the characters guessed from the text. Is it even necessary to get the gender
identities revealed? Do you have any good reason?
The Structure
The
structure of the poem is rather more important. It’s this very structure that
makes the argument, the pursuit of the speaker, so syllogistic, logical, and
probably quite effective as well. You must have noted that the poem is a 14
lined sonnet. And if you have noticed attentively, you must have noted that the
first 12 lines are thematically divided into 3 quatrains or 4 lined stanzas,
each dealing with a metaphor suggesting life approaching it’s end. And then
comes the final couplet,- lines 13-14 where the speaker stops working through
the metaphors any further and hits the point straight urging the beloved to
love more, thus concluding the argument strong, logical, and perhaps quite effective.
Like all Shakespearean sonnets, it is written in iambic pentameter and follows
the abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme. Do you feel that the structure has
got anything to do with the efficacy of the argument the speaker places?
The Metaphors
What
do you have to say about the metaphors used in the poem? They all are natural
imageries, the waning of the day, the advent of the winter, and the dying fire –
all strung up together in a series to refer to the near death matured age of
the speaker. Don’t you feel that our close familiarity with these natural
imageries make the argument more meaningful, comprehensive, and therefore more
effective?
The Archaic Words
Do
you have anything to say about the use of the archaic words? Well, use of
archaic words used to be quite common during the days of Shakespeare. Do such
archaic words induce a classical effect in keeping with the classical theme of
love?
Well,
it has been quite an exhaustive study of the text independent of the context.
Please feel free to share your minds if you have anything more to add down in
the comment box below.
The Context
How
about a bit of context now? You might find the context helpful in connoting the
text further:
Do you wonder why we have a particular number serving as the title for this poem. It's just a convention to number the sonnets that are in a sequence, or to use the first line as the title, particularly if the sonnets are not a part of a sonnet sequence. So, to understand a sonnet from a sequence, it's fairly important to know a bit about the sequence, and the preceding and the following sonnets in particular.
William
Shakespeare’s Sonnet 73 is part of the collection of 154 sonnets that were
first published together in 1609 in the quarto SHAKESPEARE’S SONNETS. The poems
are addressed to a “fair youth,” a young man of great beauty and virtue, and
they explore themes of love, time, and the transience of life.
Sonnet 73 appears in the middle of the
“fair‑youth” series (Sonnets 1‑126). It follows Sonnet 72, which urges the youth to
leave a lasting legacy, and precedes Sonnet 74, which continues the meditation on mortality.

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